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| 11/24/2004 02:30:33 AM |
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| 11/24/2004 01:23:18 AM |
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| 11/24/2004 12:34:26 AM |
Where is the key of freedom?by paha_lComment by KDO: I like the idea, because gadgets can rule your life. The title and the airplane don't work for me. I really think the artist was on to something with the gadget idea. There are some great shape motif possibilities in this image. Creative, but undefined and to frenetic for me to grasp a focal point. |
| 11/23/2004 08:48:48 PM |
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| 11/22/2004 12:39:28 AM |
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| 11/19/2004 08:55:34 PM |
Naturmortby paha_lComment by IstariV: I'll give you kudos for trying, but Im not feeling it. it needs more of a focal point or points, so it can engage the viewer. It is an interesting study in light and shadow though, especially with the art supplies. You went out on a limb here, good job, keep trying. |
| 11/19/2004 05:40:58 PM |
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| 11/19/2004 11:48:01 AM |
Naturmortby paha_lComment by joebok: I like the simple, geometric layout and the side lighting. For some reason the paperclips being in the shadow of the staples really bothers me - it seems to break the "rules" of the rest of the layout. |
| 11/19/2004 08:50:32 AM |
Naturmortby paha_lComment by Gauti: to be honest I find this subject very boring. from a technical point of view there are a few things I'd like to mention (not that I'm anything more than a novice at this): slight halo-ing around edges (esp on staples) suggest too much sharpening (USM). the shadow are both too strong and not sharp enough |
| 11/17/2004 10:40:32 AM |
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