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d95vetteComment by BAMartin: Critique Club Critique
(1) COMPOSITION (CONTENT) The composition of the photograph has followed all of the tried and true rules of composition - especially the rule of thirds. The colors are bright and vivid and give the photograph a life of its own.
(2) BACKGROUND I am thinking that the background here is the sky and the hill top. The sky is a very nice color that compliments the tourquoise water and the red of the lighthouse. Unfortunately the hilltop is rather cluttered with trees, and except for the lighthouse, has no place for the viewers eye to stop. Once the viewer has seen the lighthouse, his eye tends to wander through the photograph.
(3) CAMERA WORK ,TECHNICAL Exposure seems right on the mark. Composition is good but unimaginative.
(4) DIGITAL PROCESSING ,TECHNICAL I am thinking that a closer crop would have brought the lighthouse closer and made it more of the subject of the photograph rather than just another piece of it.
(5)MEETING THE CHALLENGE This photo does a very good job of meeting the challenge.
(6) MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO The subject here is very interesting. I think perhaps this is a photo that you might try to reshoot. This is a great location to get some really neat shots. I would try different times of the day and different angles as well.
