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My First Portrait Attempt! (My Son Karson)
06/29/2004 01:53:07 PM
My First Portrait Attempt! (My Son Karson)
06/29/2004 06:06:26 AM
My First Portrait Attempt! (My Son Karson)
by ConcreteDonkey

Comment by hughletheren:
Very good indeed for a first attempt - maybe straightening the tilt would improve, as would a smoother back drop at his feet but that would have been difficult to achiveve.
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My First Portrait Attempt! (My Son Karson)
06/29/2004 12:48:57 AM
My First Portrait Attempt! (My Son Karson)
by ConcreteDonkey

Comment by davidbedard:
A little hot on the right side of his face and too dark in some spots, but generally good contrast. Good pose and good job eliminating background shadows. Very good first portrait
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Single Mom Evicted From Condemned Home (Sad But True Story)
06/29/2004 12:17:49 AM
Single Mom Evicted From Condemned Home (Sad But True Story)
by ConcreteDonkey

Comment by JBosie:
Could have been tighter on mother & child
3 Card Monty
06/28/2004 11:25:29 PM
3 Card Monty
by ConcreteDonkey

Comment by jadin:
Greetings from the Critque Club!

Composition:
Very nice. You defined "less is more". Not only that but it's also perfect for the "rule of 1/3rds". The bright reds contrast nicely with the background, as well as differing from the flipped card.

Lighting:
I like this light. While it's extremely bright. It's not overly bright. There aren't any areas of white blown out. (No "blinkies" on the LCD, areas of no discernable data) The shadows are rich and deep. Zero complaints on the lighting.

Technical:
f/25 seems like overkill, but it'll insure the entire photo is focused. Which yours is. The photo is also properly exposed, providing maximum color / contrast.

Post-Production:
You didn't list any steps you took on the photo. But what I can say is that when you resized the photo it suffered from soft focus. Using the unsharp mask filter after resizing will keep the sharp focus that the original has at f/25 ;) I'm going to guess you tweaked the contrast and or levels etc, if so you did a great job. If not, your photography skills are even better. :)

Overall:
Great idea, great implementation. Superb lighting, contrast etc. Only recommendation is a little sharpening after resizing. Excellent work.
My First Portrait Attempt! (My Son Karson)
06/28/2004 10:42:33 PM
My First Portrait Attempt! (My Son Karson)
by ConcreteDonkey

Comment by briphoto:
the whole shot looks crooked, he doesn't have a very natural pose, and your cloth on the bottom is all wrinkled. Please don't take this too negatively- this challenge is my first portrait too, and it isn't very good either.
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My First Portrait Attempt! (My Son Karson)
06/28/2004 10:07:13 PM
Single Mom Evicted From Condemned Home (Sad But True Story)
06/28/2004 09:28:04 PM
My First Portrait Attempt! (My Son Karson)
06/28/2004 08:56:22 PM
My First Portrait Attempt! (My Son Karson)
by ConcreteDonkey

Comment by C_Steve_G:
Cropped to the upper two-thirds would have been better.
Your son is cute.
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My First Portrait Attempt! (My Son Karson)
06/28/2004 08:26:12 PM
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