Sara.2
by alonzo4b

Comment by broadwaybill:
tasteful and nice...sweet subject

Young Jazz
by alonzo4b

Comment by mpeters:
Hi from the Critique Club.

Tonights critiques are more of the rambling kind so i hope you don't mind. Here goes...

Your focus looks spot on, the lighting is soft and diffused and you did a very nice job of framing her. I especially like how the flute leads the viewers eyes up to her face(which really tells the story).

I really dont have any real criticism to offer because you did such a good job on this pic, especially considering the restrictions of the challenge. I dont really care for the big guy in the BG but thats pretty minor. I'd love it w/o the microphone too.

Good job and a 5.5xx is a pretty good score around here. This isn't the type of picture that just grabs the viewer and says "LOOK AT ME" but it is a fine example of photography. Keep shooting and good luck. Maybe i'll run into you in SF sometime. (I'll keep my eyes open :) )

PM me with any comments or questions. FWIW i like your title.

Cheers,
Mark

Young Jazz
by alonzo4b

Comment by Melethia:
Sweet!! Wonderful capture - well framed in-camera.

Young Jazz
by alonzo4b

Comment by Ragga2000:
Good one.. You can feel the music through her look... Nice capture - 8

Young Jazz
by alonzo4b

Comment by freakin_hilarious:
What a priceless expression on her face. Nice capture.

Young Jazz
by alonzo4b

Comment by Judi:
I like the expression on her face.

Young Jazz
by alonzo4b

Comment by Blue Moon:
wow, it's really not that hard to play flute!

sara8.jpg
by alonzo4b

Comment by CalliopeKel:
Nicely done. Love everything about it.

sara8.jpg
by alonzo4b

Comment by malmac55:
I loved the form, she is a great model, not like the too skinny ones. I don't like the blackness on her head or the down the left arm, otherwise a nice shot.

sara8.jpg
by alonzo4b

Comment by rommel_ron:
fabulous! truly an ART!