Two Women
by alonzo4b

Comment by violinist123:
Composition and lighting both need a lot of attention.

Two Women
by alonzo4b

Comment by coolblue:
not enough light

Two Women
by alonzo4b

Comment by bassbone:
very erotic shot - the lighting on both faces seem to need work - the woman in back is too much in shadows and the woman in front seems to be too blown out

Two Women
by alonzo4b

Comment by bigfella:
Interesting choice of fabric 8

Two Women
by alonzo4b

Comment by skewsme:
Looks like an oil painting come to life. Disturbing but also riveting.

Two Women
by alonzo4b

Comment by alexjack:
nicely posed, great idea, unfortunately your lighting isn't up to it here. With the woman on the L looking at us with real eye contact, we need some light to see that. the shadows on her chest and cross don't work well either, the lighting on the other woman is a bit to harsh, but we could handle that

great effort, try again, don't be afraid to crop from the R for a bit more drama too

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B&W Nude 2
by alonzo4b

Comment by blindjustice:
Theres a nice grit to your stuff; a real unashamed love of women; here its all about the breasts, and the hand placement is terrific, like around a towel thats not there. Great skin tones in black adn white as well.

Two Women
by alonzo4b

Comment by Dirt_Diver:
Great tit I mean title. HAHAHA Sorry I couldn't resist.... I think the make up is too much one the main model and it takes away from her actual face. Also the lighting is too strong on one and not enough on the other. But that is JMO.

Good luck with you're entry.

Two Women
by alonzo4b

Comment by abranton:
Too much eye make up on the right model. The shadow on the left model takes away from the picture, so it looks like the lighting isn't working for me

Two Women
by alonzo4b

Comment by MPRPRO:
Lovely image.