Two Papers
by jerry

Comment by TerribleOne:
Pretty silly and not very good.

Two Papers
by jerry

Comment by justine:
Okay the F- is mine......usually was in school. <lol> I like your shot. Good luck. Justine

Two Papers
by jerry

Comment by dieselbiscuit:
Good idea, and obviously a photo like this is likely to need to be staged, but I find this particular shot just too obviously phony. Perhaps if you'd played around with the composition some more your models would have loosened up and you'd have got a more effective final image?

Two Papers
by jerry

Comment by Konador:
Nice idea but to me it looks far too set-up.

Two Papers
by jerry

Comment by Ricky Cleave:
she just wants to be black, jk

The Bible
by jerry

Comment by Ruben:
I would very much like to understand your photo.

The Bible
by jerry

Comment by lina:
Thanks for not using water or sunglasses or windows for your reflection. Other than the good idea though, this picture is pretty boring. Sorry. Can't think of anything constructive.

The Bible
by jerry

Comment by marcvg:
Good idea ! I know it's not allowed here but it might be fun to have the photo in his hand in colour and the rest in B&W. It would force the focus on the photo which is the key to your composition. Good luck with the challenge.

The Bible
by jerry

Comment by johnny_justjohnny:
bonus points for creativity. don't listen to the jerkies that wanna tell you it doesn't count. they're sheep. you got something special, keep taking pictures.

The Bible
by jerry

Comment by jmsetzler:
Meets the Challenge: Not... Not as far as I can tell...
Artistic Merit (Would I print/frame/hang it?): 5
Creativity (Did a lot of thought go into this photo?): 4
Technical (Focus/DOF/Lighting/Etc): 6
Composition (Subject well-positioned and framed): 7
WOW Factor (Is the photo interesting?): 4

Score: 5 (-3 for not meeting challenge) = 2 - setzler