Last Tear
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Comment by graphicfunk:
Lovely take. Bumping up.

Last Tear
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Comment by hotpasta:
that's an amazing amount of detail...excellent, I love the blue 8

Last Tear
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Comment by Jutilda:
Wow that's awesome!!!

Beach Meltdown
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Comment by Skip:
friggen hilarious!

Beach Meltdown
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Comment by _eug:
**** Greeting from the Critique Club ****

First, some photographer's comment would be helpful in the future.

Challenge
- Relevant to the Challenge? Yes
- Is subject unique (vs. unoriginal or rehashed)? Yes and funny too.

Compostion
- Good or Bad? How can it be fixed? Good. I assume that the blue background represents water?
- Good use of Depth of Field? I would widen the DOF a stop the based of your crayons are a little soft.

Lighting
- Good use of light? Yes
- Good use of shadows? Yes

Aesthetics/Artistic Appeal:
- Colors and Contrast. I don't care for the shade of blue in the background I detracts from the Burst of Color of the crayons.
- Sharpness. Needs a little work.
- What is my reaction or feelings? It's funny at first, but then you start to see the details. Something white under the right edge of the 'towel'. The bits of torn paper on the crayons. The lack of sharpness to the crayons.

Beach Meltdown
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Comment by newty1:
great stuff very funny :)

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Comment by ShotMD:
Cute... most orriginal. It is also well executed to boot. The only constructive thing I can think to add would be a wider DoF. This is personal taste, but since there isn't much background to distract, I think it would add a crispness without distracting. Well done.

Beach Meltdown
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Comment by Cam:
Thats very cute and imaginative......well done.

Beach Meltdown
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Comment by spydr:
Now thats funny

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Comment by melismatica:
Only Yellow appears to be upset by this tragic mishap. Blue seems peeved but not overly concerned over the fate of poor Orange and Red is standing off in the background rubbernecking. I like that there is stil a bit of head left on Orange--it's rather unsettling and gory in a whimsical sort of way.