belly
by shutterfly

Comment by Jacko:
Nice shot, how did you achieve these tones? Very nice belly and a cute belly button ring. Good job and good luck..

belly
by shutterfly

Comment by ambaker:
I love the soft muted colors of this one. 10!

Happy Holidays dpc!!!
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Comment by Lustre:
A little bit harsh on the eyes. I like the concept. Perhaps a slightly off white (yellow, gold or even grey) background would work?

at the bottom of the slide
by shutterfly

Comment by Kavey:
Critique Club


Initial thoughts
Sweet!

Composition/ Content
I think the content is great – my favourite aspect is the way the motion makes her feet look so big – or is she just wearing socks that are too large? :) I like the expression on her face and the motion in her right hand.
Composition wise I don’t like the inclusion of all the netting etc at the top. Playing around with the shot my favourite composition is to crop it at top, left and right – I’ve taken the liberty of having a go and if you’d like to see it just drop me an email.

Background
As above – I’d prefer to focus in on the little girl – with just the bottom lip of the tube showing – and above and to the sides of her only blackness.

Fits The Challenge
Yep!

Your Opinion On The Photo
Like it – it’s fun and engaging.

shiney new cars
by shutterfly

Comment by magnetic9999:
do you sell them? can i have one? :) ill take silver.

shiney new cars
by shutterfly

Comment by Harz_Joerg:
The idea to show "shiney new cars" is great. But why didn't you choose the showroom. there you would have had better light and not the disturbing snow that makes the whole picture look not very shiny at all.

shiney new cars
by shutterfly

Comment by undieyatch:
very nice crop...... only the essential visual information.

shiney new cars
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Comment by Slimharpo:
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shiney new cars
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Comment by tab262:
snow is a distraction

shiney new cars
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Comment by Marsha:
This would have been a great entry for the "four" challenge!