Eat less chocolate.... yeah, right.
by KiwiChris

Comment by f-32:
Ah, come on... NObody can quit eating Cadbury's, can they? And if they could, would you want to know them? THAT kind of people???

Eat less chocolate.... yeah, right.
by KiwiChris

Comment by whatdewuc:
Good concept and composition. I would like the script on chocolate a little sharper. The imperfections on the corner squares are a bit distracting. Good luck and HNY.

Eat less chocolate.... yeah, right.
by KiwiChris

Comment by ahaze:
nice composition, but nothing makes me go "wow".

Eat less chocolate.... yeah, right.
by KiwiChris

Comment by Bran-O-Rama:
Nice crop and lovely composition. I know it's hard to give up chocolate, especially when that's all you get for Xmas ;)

Eat less chocolate.... yeah, right.
by KiwiChris

Comment by Bear_Music:
This one may be TOO sharp... Mistify it a little and the choclate would look more "dangerous"... The ble/type diagonal area is way too agressive, I think. A little desaturation there might have worked wonders.

Coming in to land.
by KiwiChris

Comment by rayg544:
This is a really cool shot. Love the way you shot it from the back. Certainly does look like he's coming in for a landing. Good Stuff!

Janine
by KiwiChris

Comment by crabappl3:
I like the smile and overall relaxed feel of the shot. The one thing I'd suggest is cropping in a little to remove some of the negative space above her, and cropping out the fingers on the lower right. The natural light worked very well for your shot.

-danny

Janine
by KiwiChris

Comment by cbeller:
Overal a nice portrait, with good natural lighting. A couple nit picks, since you asked for critiques.

The highlights are just starting to blow out, especially on the neck. There are a few distracting reflections on the glasses (I've learned glasses are a pain). She is squinting a bit, particularly her left eye (our right), so you barely see the catchlight. You may have tried having her turn her head just a tad further to her left (our right), not much though.

Nice portrait though. I'm sure her parents will love it.

Janine
by KiwiChris

Comment by suemack:
They'll be delighted with this lovely portrait! I really like the lighting on her face, it's soft and flattering.

sue

Late for work again.
by KiwiChris

Comment by KiwiChris:
Thanks for the comments folks...