REONP11.jpg
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Comment by TooCool:
My comments on your other shots about the processing goes for this one also. This is probably my least favorite. I don't like the vacant stare into the void. Don't like the noisy (as in loud or too bright) background. Don't like the plastic look of your model. A little less NI and clone out the crease under her shoulder and this would be overall much better! Hey, what is that line that goes down the right side of the background?
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REONP08.jpg
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Comment by TooCool:
This one is maybe a touch too suggestive for a 14 year old girl however putting that aside, the pose is nice and natural and she has a great smile and expression! Don't care for the processing though. Looks too plastic for my taste! Once again, a girl has pores, skin textures and this one has freckles. This looks like you processed a good bit of her personality away...
TC

REONP05.jpg
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Comment by TooCool:
This one has a nice pose and good lighting though I agree with G&S on the light showing under her, ummm, boob (gotta remember she's 14 :-P)... That light and the print on her shirt are distracting. I also think you overdid the NI on this one...
TC

REONP09.jpg
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Comment by TooCool:
Very cute! Nice lighting. You have one hot spot on her lips that I would clone or burn. As a parent I must comment on the low rise jeans and belly shir though... I know it seems wierd that I think this is a smidge on the inappropriate side but a bikini isn't but there is something a touch more suggestive about this outfit for some reason...
TC

REONP10.jpg
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Comment by TooCool:
Very cute! I wish I knew how you could lite the kitty so there is more detail in her fur though...
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REONP04.jpg
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Comment by TooCool:
This one is by far the best of the bunch! Love the expression and action in the hair. The posing and croping are excellent! Don't you dare clone out the hair in her face! It adds to the overall movement of the shot. The only thing I would change would be to increase DOF to get all the hair in focus but not enough to bring the background into focus...
TC

REONP03.jpg
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Comment by TooCool:
This one is very nice but could use a little fill flash or something to get more detail out of the kitties fur... The background though loud actually works very nicely here!
TC

Message edited by author 2006-05-28 17:22:05.

REONP02.jpg
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Comment by TooCool:
This one is very nice posing and expression. Only thing I would like to have seen is a bit of hair lighting to bring out more detail on the top and back side. Did you PS the DOF in or is it in camera?
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REONP07.jpg
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Comment by TooCool:
I agree again with ShutterPug on this one as far as the smile goes. Nice comfortable expression. The pose however still looks forced and the background is quite distracting. Maybe if it was a little more out of focus...
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REONP01.jpg
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Comment by TooCool:
I agree with ShutterPug on this one. Nice shot except for that awful background...
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