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Comment by photom:
Nice capture of the coin in flight - helping someone make a choice. Black background is perfect for this. Exposure and composition right on. A very minor point is the removal of the whitish spot to the left of the bracelet on the wrist.

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Comment by redmoon:
well, this is the best coin tossing shot (totally blasts mine). HOW you got such a great shot with the coin in flight will have me scratching my head for yonks. i hope you tell. i like this muchly, though the one thing i'd add is that the hand looks a bit yellow / orange to me - perhaps the lighting is a little harsh? still, very good shot! 9.

still one more day...
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Comment by BikeRacer:
Hello from the Critique Club!

I like the idea you had for the challenge, but think you could have made a few changes to the framing or the choices for focus and depth of field to make it more strongly convey the sense of waiting.

For instance: I'd probably try a tighter crop that shows fewer days after the circled date. I'd also try a shallower depth of field to really add weight to the 12th. To me the pencil adds to the photo, but it is perhaps a bit too prominent - maybe less of it, or more out of focus would have been less distracting from the subject of the shot. My last nit would be the slight green discoloration on the table near the bottom center of the image - I think it stops your eyes there.

I like your use of color - the orange and red highlights on the calendar go nicely with the pencil and wood of the table. I also like the even lighting.

Feel free to critique my critique,
Ara

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Comment by bethany_marie_23:
I really love this picture..there is only one thing that I would change if it were my picture and it would be the red hue in the hand. But it's still really nice!

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Comment by Salina:
captured moment, nice.

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Comment by piercedJon:
This one works with the title, with no title it would be less of a choice and more of a chance. Its quite nicely frozen and seems quite sharp.

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Comment by CaptainJack:
What a great shot. Love it.

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Comment by seanami:
Nice capture

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Comment by gaja_tz:
good idea = 7

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Comment by Philos:
I like this...
1 of my 3 fav's give you a 10