Alluring
by Makka

Comment by Jason_Cross:
Wow the lighting is good. I really like it.

Alluring
by Makka

Comment by Cantique:
The rich color is wonderful in this portrait. My only complaint is the white thing in the center of her bra. I'm not sure if it's okay to do this, but I'd clone it out. It pulls the eye away from her beautiful face and chest.

Alluring
by Makka

Comment by RUEDISCHMUTZ:
Yes, an other pro photo 8

Alluring
by Makka

Comment by noraneko:
Consider toning skin on legs a bit - has a red cast that doesn't match golden effect on chest. Great lighting around face, though.

Alluring
by Makka

Comment by Nusbaum:
Excellent work!
+ The exposure and tonality across her face and chest is wonderful.
+ The eyes are well lit even though her right eye is slightly shadowed.
+ Subtle but nice lighting on the background to give separation.
- The only slight minus... and I had too long a long time to find anything... is the sharp transition from light to shadow where her left wrist is bent. A little abrupt for an image with such smooth transitions.... but so minor I wouldn't have mentioned except to show how well done the overall image is.

Tamara
by Makka

Comment by Puckzzz:
Okey if I give my opninion as well? I do a lot of modellingshoots. Like the pose although it seems a bit stiff. The expression is fine, but personally I would've done something about the darkness underneath her eyes. You say you wanted to play with the lighting and catch some shadows, however I find the shadows in the face minimal. If you put the softbox a little more to the side of the model you would've had more shadows on the left of here face, and then try to catch the light in both eyes. what I love about the picture is the way the spikes run down her back. it almost gives a reptile feel to it! like it very much! One more little detail (yes I pay a lot of attention to details) she presses her arm into her leg wich creates a slight bulge that makes her leg look bigger than it is. Hope you find this comment helpfull :-)

Tamara
by Makka

Comment by ChimericImager:
Nice shot..have you considered using a SNOOT of BARDOORS? ... will
give you much tighter control of your lighting.

Naomi & Cliff
by Makka

Comment by surfinbird:
I like this picture. Nice depth of field, good colours and happy faces - and so they should be!

Alluring
by Makka

Comment by hotpasta:
lovely portrait, I really like the lighting and composition...title suits the image

Green dress 2
by Makka

Comment by dwterry:
Love the lighting, both on her and the splash on the background. Looks like a fun model to work with too. :-)