Lunar Landing?by
rll07Comment by Azrifel: ~~~~Critique Club Comment~~~~
Composition (content)
Nice compostion. The plane passing makes the photo. It adds something interesting, the trail adds depth and most of all height. :)
I think that, as a joke (also given the score), you could rotate it 90 degrees to the right and call it "Rocket to the moon". Somehow it looks even better after a horizontal flip with a rotation of 90 degrees to the left.
Background
The moon is not full. I think it looks better this way.
The background is incredibly noisy. Perhaps a result of enlarging?
Camera Work (Technical)
Can't say much really. For other readers: When you shoot the moon, try to keep the shutter speed fast! The reasons are twofold:
1) The moon moves and it moves fast. Enough to get a blur when you zoomed in on it with a telescope or big zoom lens.
2) The moon is sunlit! That means that it is very bright and returns a lot of light, just as a sunlit wall.
Perhaps another lens? 600mm with a converter? :)
Digital Processing (technical)
Photo is big in filesize, so we are not seeing the results of heavy compression. The noise is what breaks the photo. :(
My opinion
Really interesting, could be stunning when it wasn't so grainy and noisy.