1st Birthday
by rll07

Comment by Jacko:
lol Wonderfull action shot. Really tells a story. Two things: I find the pink border a bit "tacky" and there is too much dead space in the square (white stuff). Still a very effective shot. Jacko. 7

1st Birthday
by rll07

Comment by wingy:
The top left to bottom right appraoch here doesn't seem to serve any purpose, and it turns your final product into more white space than photos. Going straight across would have been a better idea I think. The photos themselves have a snapshot quality to them without any of them standing out as particularly impressive photos on their own. However, together they do tell a story very effectively, which is more than many entries achieved. 3

1st Birthday
by rll07

Comment by Gracious:
lol....too much partying I guess...lol very cute. Made me smile!

1st Birthday
by rll07

Comment by tomzinho:
nice sequence of photos. i think you left too much empty space in the overall combination that reduces the effectiveness of the combination. i think the photos themselves could have been a little tighter on the subject.

Can I have some?
by rll07

Comment by MattW:
Nice clarity and I like how you shot some of the field and not just the animals.

1st Birthday
by rll07

Comment by pinback:
Great expressions, but there's a lot of empty space in the composition.

1st Birthday
by rll07

Comment by Sonifo:
I have a couple of suggestions even though I am not very good at this. Maybe put borders around the individual pictures. Put some text in it to give it more interest. Looks like she didn't have to much fun. What a cutie!

1st Birthday
by rll07

Comment by mariomel:
The pictures of the baby are nice, but I really don't like the border and the way you assembled them on the canvas. There is far too much white, unused space.

1st Birthday
by rll07

Comment by eikidigi:
I was thinking of the same idea for my photo!, but did another

1st Birthday
by rll07

Comment by Gracechild7:
Too much negative space I'm afraid....