Whitewash
by dunces

Comment by jose3032:
flash really washed out the picture. eyes are captivating

Whitewash
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Comment by tsheets:
Nice shot. But, I think I would have toned down the lights a bit, and titled it 'Freedom' or something along those lines. The model seems to have a very care-free confidence. That helps this image a lot. Well done.

Whitewash
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Comment by metoecus:
A little less light on your model's chest would allow the shadows to bring out her curves. The message conveyed by her pursed lips conflicts with the openness suggested by the position of her arms; a less restrained smile would go a long way. I'm not generally a fan of high-key photos, but aside from the lack of definition on her over-illuminated breasts you did a nice job lighting her; the catchlight is nicely done.

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Comment by hyperfocal:
I love high-key, but this seems just a bit too much.. Other wise nice.

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Comment by graphicfunk:
Great light splash effect. Facial expression is solid and the composition with hands reaching out give the image a special dlavor. Very well done. Bumping up.

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Comment by Tallbloke:
Interesting portrait. The over exposure works to create the low key look.

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Comment by groggyfroggy:
I really like the contrast and high key of this shot. I feel that the model in the center is what messes it up for me. I wish you luck.

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Comment by mycelium:
brave pose. crop is a bit too tight on the bottom, I think - show a bit more of the abdomen and get the background pure white and this would be a really great picture. the idea is solid and the model is attractive.

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Comment by strangeghost:
Your model is beautiful, the facial expression is loaded with subtleties, but the breasts are so over exposed that the picture loses some of its appeal and impact.

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Comment by lsmart:
I like the composition with the spontaneus pose and the lights.