TRP
by FrostyPaws

Comment by HeiSch:
a little dark, makes her melt in with the background

TRP
by FrostyPaws

Comment by Nullix:
Try again and get the exposure right.

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by FrostyPaws

Comment by Dirt_Diver:
Lighting is off, there is food on her shirt, her face is dirty and the background is too busy. Try working on these when taking pictures of people.

TRP
by FrostyPaws

Comment by MilesW:
An extra 1/2 or 1/3 stop exposure perhaps?

TRP
by FrostyPaws

Comment by alliebeal:
I like her expression, but a clutter free background and a different shirt would help IMO.

TRP
by FrostyPaws

Comment by KarisMo:
very dark. dirty clothes

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by FrostyPaws

Comment by pixeldust:
Precious model, but a little dark. I love those eyes.

TRP
by FrostyPaws

Comment by pamelasue:
lighting is flat

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by FrostyPaws

Comment by nheilweil:
Cute kid but the dirty shirt, messy hair and cluttered background (especially the toy at left of head) don't make me think that you put much effort into this shot.

spool tree
by FrostyPaws

Comment by digitalknight:
if this were a visual scavenger hunt, you'd win -

Show me this scene with more controled lighting (like in your garage with the garage door open, and a reflector on the "non-door" side of the tree. - show me this in a way that I haven't seen it before - or the DPC community hasn't seen it, and you'll get better scores. More importantly you'll be a better artist as showing your vision to the world.

Hope that helps.