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Comment by Plachoochi:
I like your idea but the tree and the sign to the left overwhelm the photo and are very distracting.

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Comment by amandalore:
composition could use some work, but great idea and nice focus on the window

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Comment by BrianR:
What failed in this Image? the alarm system,the open sign,the focus, the space avaiable for a commercial.....4

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Comment by no__1__here:
Odd composition for me. Nice job getting the sign in focus, but the rest of the shot detracts from the overall, I think.

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Comment by albc28:
You don't make it clear where failure falls into this photo. The image has a tree right in the path of sight, which distracts from the whats in the windo. The window also has too much of a reflection. everytime I look at the window I'm first drawn to the open sign, then the red car in the background and finally the alarm sign.

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Comment by Titia:
Can't really make the connection to failure here

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Comment by cutlassdude70:
I like the shot, but why is it "failure"?

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Comment by Germaine:
Great mood. You can make up your own story to go with this one.

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Comment by amber:
This is a wonderful image. Clean, crisp, interesting. Wonderful desaturation;)

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Comment by amber:
Nice converging lines and colour!