Waiting to grow up
by MAK

Comment by seanami:
really great lighting.

Hit from all sides
by MAK

Comment by melismatica:
The placement of the watch against this background makes for a confusing composition. It's a rather noisy image and there are quite a few hotspots (the edge of the watch face and the top edge of the frame). The bead thing is rather interesting as an abstract and I encourage you to work on the lighting some more and see what you come up with.

Hit from all sides
by MAK

Comment by Jesuispeure:
It's got some strange color splotches going on, most noticably on the face of the watch. This is one that may have benefitted from Neat Image. Otherwise, it's got a nice composition and I like the choice of colors.

Hit from all sides
by MAK

Comment by Ambo:
way to dark for any real detail to be seen...

Hit from all sides
by MAK

Comment by Zal:
You need to have the watch lit up too! As it is now, why is the watch even in the frame?

Hit from all sides
by MAK

Comment by wkoffel:
This is rather dark and indistinct, even on my bright mac monitor. And the bottom edge of the (watch?) face seems to have a lot of cmopression artifacts along the hilites, maybe a photoshop issue?

The Dying Habbit
by MAK

Comment by melismatica:
Visually cluttered (that vent in the lower right corner, the door breaking up the background, the blurry foreground. Nothing particularly interesting about this scene. It shows a habit but not in a new or interesting way.

The Dying Habbit
by MAK

Comment by cghubbell:
Good selection of point of view. More depth of field is required to make this angle work though; The blurred foreground is a distraction. Would also be nice if the chairs were aligned to create a repeating pattern.

The Dying Habbit
by MAK

Comment by hannafate:
The flash makes this shot look flat. Try disabling your flash, and taking more pictures!

The Dying Habbit
by MAK

Comment by ronlcox:
In any language, right. Like the way, whatever they are, leads your eye to the sign and your use of DOF. Lighting could be better.