Hit from all sides
by MAK

Comment by melismatica:
The placement of the watch against this background makes for a confusing composition. It's a rather noisy image and there are quite a few hotspots (the edge of the watch face and the top edge of the frame). The bead thing is rather interesting as an abstract and I encourage you to work on the lighting some more and see what you come up with.

Hit from all sides
by MAK

Comment by Jesuispeure:
It's got some strange color splotches going on, most noticably on the face of the watch. This is one that may have benefitted from Neat Image. Otherwise, it's got a nice composition and I like the choice of colors.

Hit from all sides
by MAK

Comment by Ambo:
way to dark for any real detail to be seen...

Hit from all sides
by MAK

Comment by Zal:
You need to have the watch lit up too! As it is now, why is the watch even in the frame?

Hit from all sides
by MAK

Comment by wkoffel:
This is rather dark and indistinct, even on my bright mac monitor. And the bottom edge of the (watch?) face seems to have a lot of cmopression artifacts along the hilites, maybe a photoshop issue?

The Dying Habbit
by MAK

Comment by melismatica:
Visually cluttered (that vent in the lower right corner, the door breaking up the background, the blurry foreground. Nothing particularly interesting about this scene. It shows a habit but not in a new or interesting way.

The Dying Habbit
by MAK

Comment by cghubbell:
Good selection of point of view. More depth of field is required to make this angle work though; The blurred foreground is a distraction. Would also be nice if the chairs were aligned to create a repeating pattern.

The Dying Habbit
by MAK

Comment by hannafate:
The flash makes this shot look flat. Try disabling your flash, and taking more pictures!

The Dying Habbit
by MAK

Comment by ronlcox:
In any language, right. Like the way, whatever they are, leads your eye to the sign and your use of DOF. Lighting could be better.

The Dying Habbit
by MAK

Comment by Falc:
I know what you are trying to convey, but the image lacks punch. the dof is lacking, the out of focus chairs need cropping out. The lighting is awful and needs some external light source.