Sensu
by MAK

Comment by PiechProductions:
I like your composition here a lot. It leads me off the frame following her gaze. The only thing is, I think I might have liked the fan to be on the bottom left of the frame so as to balance the image because so much weight is on the right. Otherwise, I really like the soft focus and dramatic light. 8.

Windows
by MAK

Comment by jeger:
Greetings from the critique club...

I wasn't able to vote on this challenge, but if I had, I probably would have given this image a 6. This photograph fits the theme very well. The window in the background lets the viewer know there is a primary light source, and that a flash was used to fill in the details on the models face. From that stand point, you have done very well.

Artistically, there are 2 areas where I have some suggestions. First of all, I am really not sure what it is the model is doing. Is he holding a shovel? Is he pulling a sled? While a photograph doesn't have to be crystal clear in subject, I think it might have helped out a little more when it comes to viewers votes. Also, I quite like the red hair because it stands out from everything else and helps establish a focal point (the mans head). I find the red (shirt?) in the background is fighting for attention. Had it not been there, the red hair on the man would have jumped out that much more. Interesting shot overall.

If you need any clarification on any of my comments, please feel free to pm me. It might take some time for me to get back to you.

Windows
by MAK

Comment by bassbone:
Marac - Really cool shot. A complete bummer about your car. At least we will have another gold medal to fly for Team Polska!

Windows
by MAK

Comment by Art Roflmao:
Sorry to hear about your car, Marac! That sucks! You spend too much time in alleys. :P

Hope you can put it behind you and still manage to enjoy the holidays.

Cheers.

Windows
by MAK

Comment by Panks:
nice lighting ..nicely done .

Windows
by MAK

Comment by pamelasue:
really cool image ... I love the graffiti backdrop ... focus and exposure are well done

Windows
by MAK

Comment by Mark-A:
So cool MAK, I just gotta work with JJ some day soon!

Good luck with this one - I love it, great shot!

Windows
by MAK

Comment by pffree:
great picture

The Invisable Man
by MAK

Comment by Structor:
Great shot. Congrats on your high finish!

Survivor
by MAK

Comment by SandyP:
Wow! How exotically dramatic! Man! Congratulations on such a phenomenal showing in a challenge I was too intimidated to even enter. (That and nothing I shot turned out worth two hoots)