Nass
by MAK

Comment by Covert_Oddity:
A lot of the area in this shot feels a touch soft, particularly around the forehead and chin area, but at the same time areas you wouldn't expect to be are in focus, such as parts of the material, are. I think either your DOF is too shallow, or you have actually missed the focus and artificially compensated in processing but the result isn't great.

Nuditsu
by MAK

Comment by Art Roflmao:
Solid finish, Marac. I liked this one a lot.

Nuditsu
by MAK

Comment by Limescope:
Beautiful model and a well executed photograph, only problem (for me) here is that she is intentionally pulling away her clothing. It may have been more powerful if it had been an "accidental slip". (duct tape?) ;)

necks
by MAK

Comment by Melethia:
I like these guys in B&W.

necks
by MAK

Comment by Jaded_Housewife:
*not voting as I'm in this challenge-just commenting since I've seen requests for comments in the challenge thread*


pretty. my only real problem here is the BG. I'd kind of like to see more detail in the BG or have it just all black. the way it is seems to take away from the flamingos themselves.

Nuditsu
by MAK

Comment by emperorsss:
Ok. this is OK .

Nuditsu
by MAK

Comment by retiredPhil:
Distract him then punch him out. Good tactic! Liked the white kimono with the white background. Little bit of blow out on her right side.

Nuditsu
by MAK

Comment by lostside:
nice work

necks
by MAK

Comment by DrewLong:
love the counter balancing subjects... think a slight change in compostion could help accentuate it... but don't know what that would be... ha

Nuditsu
by MAK

Comment by ordinaryangel:
I get the idea and you've executed it well, though I think it could still qualify for the challenge and still be just as enticing to have the yukata falling over the currently exposed breast a little(the less is more approach so to speak)