KEEPER OF DREAMS
by karol

Comment by Gordon:
pink strip in the front is distracting

KEEPER OF DREAMS
by karol

Comment by Gracious:
Nice subject, good texture. The red on the bottom detracts, as I'm sure many have already told you. The water on the blue is different but doesn't seem to fit, or add to the composition.

KEEPER OF DREAMS
by karol

Comment by Guillermo:
Are those "RainX" bubbles?? Very nice.

KEEPER OF DREAMS
by karol

Comment by dreamstate:
IMHO, the front flash is too bright. Although the object may be old, the photo doesn't reinforce/illustrate it.

KEEPER OF DREAMS
by karol

Comment by jmsetzler:
interesting effect with the water :) I would have tried to crop out the red line along the bottom of this photo... I think that a little bit of light diffusion between your flash and the subject could be an improvement also. when the flash is going to 'heat' up your image, you can do a few things to dampen it... one that works for me is to tape a piece of kleenex across the flash.. this dampens the flash and gives you the light you need for a subject shot like this one :) - jmsetzler

KEEPER OF DREAMS
by karol

Comment by karmat:
I think cropping it a touch tighter at the bottom to eliminate the red/pink stripe would have improved this picture. It's got great focus, and I like the water drops. I also like the contrast between the background colors. karmat

KEEPER OF DREAMS
by karol

Comment by floyd:
Is this wonderful old box sitting on a very wet tabletop? I hope it wasnt damaged! Otherwise - great to be able to see so much detail. I think my only criticism is the small amount of red at the bottom which needn't have been there and which makes the picture look like it slopes to the left.

KEEPER OF DREAMS
by karol

Comment by sohr:
Not quite sure what the blue material is, but it's kinda neat.

The diagonal red thingy at the bottom is distracting. The flash lighting is quite harsh, too-- but that thing sure does look old!

--5-- sohr

KEEPER OF DREAMS
by karol

Comment by amonteforte:
Nice pic. I would have cut with the cropping the lower right edge to disapear the redish portion. I like the detail of the water drops and the combination of the blue surface against the background.

KEEPER OF DREAMS
by karol

Comment by lolly_gagger:
the water droplets are distracting and don't make sense