Twilighter
by stupidcat

Comment by Jutilda:
Ariel has beautiful eyes!!

Bubbly
by stupidcat

Comment by hotpasta:
a square crop, tighter in would have been better for this quirky image

Twilighter
by stupidcat

Comment by onesaint:
BG is a bit boring. Love the eyes! book is very distracting, but maybe its because its twilight and my wife and daughter have gone nuts over it.

Twilighter
by stupidcat

Comment by photokariangel:
i bet this woudl look good with just teh book in color. or perhaps a tighter crop with just the book and her face filling the frame, good lighting.

Bubbly
by stupidcat

Comment by Dr.Confuser:
Odd, arresting image. Didn't like it on first viewing but it's growing on me.

Bubbly
by stupidcat

Comment by Ken:
Overall I like what you've done, but it would be nice to see a bit of contrast between the shirt and background.

Young Indiana Jones
by stupidcat

Comment by Jutilda:
I love the low key approach. This is awesome. Great use of negative space. This is my kind of portrait. :~)

sydney_day3.jpg
by stupidcat

Comment by Jutilda:
Really sweet. She is lovely. I think this might be cool in BW too, since there is so much busy patterns going on here. Nothing is more touching than a sleeping child. It has the AWWW factor for sure. :~)

The Joker
by stupidcat

Comment by TCGuru:
Composition: I like the placement of the elements within the frame.

Lighting/Exposure: Light is good. Focus seems a tad off on the face. It seems that the focal point was on the card and it managed to get the card and the nose :)

Pose: I rather like the pose.

Suggestions for Improvements: A clean card ;) I think that at f4, had you focused on the nose instead of the card, it would have all fallen into the focal plane quite well.

I love your creativity. Looking forward to more :)

ariel_day1.jpg
by stupidcat

Comment by Jutilda:
This has an almost creepy feel to it with the harsh contrasts and her ominous smile. Well done.