Go Bucs!
by stupidcat

Comment by photokariangel:
fun image, i love the energy she brings.

Her Lollipop
by stupidcat

Comment by photokariangel:
her left arm is a little blown out, and the crop isnt really composing the image correctly. but, i love the subject and the huge lolli!

Beret
by stupidcat

Comment by photokariangel:
fun pose, one thing to do it make sure her eyes pop more, they seem to be getting a little dull.

Day 8
by stupidcat

Comment by photokariangel:
wish her eyes were a little more in focus instead of the headband, but still a very color full and nice photo.

Winter is here...
by stupidcat

Comment by photokariangel:
the whites are a little too bright for my eyes, but i love her expression, and playign with the hat is a cute, inviting idea.

Young Indiana Jones
by stupidcat

Comment by lovethelight:
Nicely lit, well done

Twilighter
by stupidcat

Comment by bassbone:
this one looks like it could use a bit of a crop - especially at the top of the image - the wide crop seems as if it unnecessary

The Joker
by stupidcat

Comment by bassbone:
dark and foreboding - very good mimic of Heath's interpretation of the Joker

ariel_day1.jpg
by stupidcat

Comment by rmezzo:
Good start. I like the high contrast B&W in this shot, but not sure about the one green eye. Maybe you could explain why you decided on only one eye. Is it a Twilight thing?

I think the crop is a little too tight as well as her chin is cut off and there's very little of the glass shown.

Twilighter
by stupidcat

Comment by TCGuru:
Composition: I like the way it feels like we have interrupted her reading.

Lighting/Exposure: DOF is great. Light is nice but a little flat.

Pose: N/A since it is a bit of a candid style shot.

Suggestions for Improvements: Perhaps move the light on the right side a bit higher. The way you have them now lights her very evenly and makes her very 2D. Generally, with a portrait or any other style of shot, you are looking to create a feeling of depth with your lighting. She needs some shadows somewhere :)

You nailed the focus in this shot. Her eyes really pop out of this photo. Very nice environmental portrait :)