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| 07/17/2004 09:36:42 PM |
Wild Freedomby artvetComment by JBjb: Beautiful! Great proportion. Perfect shades. Speaks of a very wild, very fierce sort of freedom. |
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| 07/16/2004 07:28:30 PM |
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| 07/14/2004 05:38:56 AM |
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| 07/11/2004 05:37:37 PM |
Me and Myselfby artvetComment by graphicfunk: from the critique club:
You have captured superb coloration. Its' only minor flaw is the slight yellow cast which required only a slight tweak. The idea is creative and very well presented. The reflective expression wins hands up. Also, the composition is very strong and the model a sweetheart. Now let us consider if we can improve on this idea.
The first item to discuss is the dual focus points. It seems to me that the reflection in the image is the winner. Not enough time spent in seeking the best angle of the profile, I even see a part of her cheeks at the lip juncture. Since this idea is so effective, I would even advise its redo. Our hindsight here is 20-20. Consider changing the color of the garment to a lighter tone. This would reduce the sharp focus of the profile and shed some reflective light on the mirrored figure. After such alteration you may want a lighter background. To avoid critical color correction it may even be better to allow some hair to frame the left of the frame. You will still have a dual focus but the viewers will be more hard pressed to find minor faults. Whenever, you shoot people I always suggest to do a white balance shot. This helps keep the tones honest.
Again, you did a very good job and with a minor tweak to rid the slight yellow tinge, it remains an impressive image and one worthy of your port. dan |
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| 07/07/2004 08:15:44 PM |
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| 07/06/2004 01:51:09 PM |
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