Big Al's Old Bus
by Guillermo

Comment by Guillermo:
Than you all for all the comments, critiques and praises. I am really happy with the results being my first time entering the contest. Hope to get better with time. Thanks again. gmo.

Big Al's Old Bus
by Guillermo

Comment by jimmsp:
Something old. Use your photographic technique to emphasize the age of your subject.
Composition - good
Technical Aspects - good. I'd like a little more contrast
Meets Challenge - I think so. Don't confuse old with unused
Visual Impact / Originality - quite good

Big Al's Old Bus
by Guillermo

Comment by Kavey:
Love the way it's parked on the grass - is that the last stop on route 810?

Big Al's Old Bus
by Guillermo

Comment by mjcecil:
Oddly enough, I drive by this bus about every other day. I keep trying to figure out how to make a good photo out of it. You have done as well as I ever could, based on the surrounds and placement of the bus.

Big Al's Old Bus
by Guillermo

Comment by LanSnake:
Nice subject -- I think the photo would be better with a bit more contrast (everything is now almost the same shade of gray).

Big Al's Old Bus
by Guillermo

Comment by karmat:
I think a touch more contrast might help this picture, it seems kinda muted grey now. The contrast might make the shadows darker or soemthing. Also, and this is minor, but. . . . the back of the bus is in pretty good shape, it looks like. Maybe frame it so that the front half or third of the bus is "entering" the picture. karmat

Big Al's Old Bus
by Guillermo

Comment by UberFish:
There is a plant or stick in front of the bus that could be removed.

Big Al's Old Bus
by Guillermo

Comment by jmsetzler:
I wanna meet Big Al... this is a cool bus :) I suppose this *is* old... we don't have too many busses like this in the US :) - good shot.. - jmsetzler

Big Al's Old Bus
by Guillermo

Comment by MagsCoyote:
black & white ruins this picture

Big Al's Old Bus
by Guillermo

Comment by jsabbarton:
Meets the challenge. I like the grey effect, but the subject looks really clean and new in an old kind way ΓΆ€“ gosh, I hope you know what I mean, because I'm not sure I do :)