Mmmmmmmmmmmmm.....messy
by boyte1

Comment by wewillexplore:
Mmmmmm tasty!

The Film
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Comment by loz1:
This is cool :)

The Official Make Your Own Rainbow Kit
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Comment by marco:
I like it that you used different kinds of pencils. Good job!

The Film
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Comment by lisae:
Hmmmm...... not sure what to make of this one. Should you have tried to create the atmosphere of the film, as a homage? Or is it enough to just show some promotional stuff? I think the composition is OK, but the photo borrows too much from the design work done by the promotional team for the film. Not much creativity evident in arranging and photographing the poster and CD.

76 Degrees and falling
by boyte1

Comment by crabappl3:
Critique Club Comment:

Greatings!

This is a nice abstract. I am immediately drawn to the unusual camera angle used. I feel this angle works well as to give the image a more unique quality. The two elements of this shot that may have been tweaked are the oversaturation of the reflected light and the background being light enough to make out the edge of the container. I think the grey isn't bad, just that if it were a true black it might lend itself to better contrast to the thermometer. The hotspot in the blue object seems to overwhelm the picture making the 'glare' the main focal point. This keeps the eye from flowing up to the other one.

Your post processing seems good, no jpeg artifacts or other issues other then your image is only 467 pixels on its longest side. Using the full 640 would help us make out more detail.

This is a nice shot. I wouldn't mind seeing it used again with some new angles and backgrounds.

The Official Make Your Own Rainbow Kit
by boyte1

Comment by Crafty Sue:
good color

The Official Make Your Own Rainbow Kit
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Comment by wewillexplore:
Given the background, I wish there were less blues in here. I like the reflective surface for this shot.

The Official Make Your Own Rainbow Kit
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Comment by Becky:
I like the reflections.

The Film
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Comment by carsten:
My only favourite in the pi-challenge. Great colours, focus and cropping. I like the composition too. Very well done. Good luck!

The Official Make Your Own Rainbow Kit
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Comment by kiwiness:
Good, offsetting the center like that gives this image that extra boost. Pity that the green pencil on the right is broken tho, couldn't you have turned it a bit?