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by aelith

Comment by DrJOnes:
Very nice use of lighting. Nice framing. Nice "static" shot. I miss some feelings. 7

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Comment by whobee:
Crisp, clear, well lit.

It's all in your mind.
by aelith

Comment by wingy:
whatever sin you had in mind for this to represent isn't shown clearly enough. Composition is so-so. Lighting seems like it needs some work. 3 wingy

It's all in your mind.
by aelith

Comment by HBunch:
I've never read this book, and I have no clue what it's about, so I will assume that there is something "7 sins-like" in the book. I am very glad there is a light highlighting the edge of the book, or else it would have blended in too well with the shirt. The lighting is good, and I think that the angle and framign/cropping are also good. The strangle angle here works to give it some interest rather than just a person reading a bood. Nice shot. Good luck in the challenge. ~Hbunch7187~

It's all in your mind.
by aelith

Comment by jpoole:
Nice composition.

It's all in your mind.
by aelith

Comment by smshats:
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 8 , Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 5 , Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 4 , Total Averaged Rating 6 . smshats

It's all in your mind.
by aelith

Comment by Sonifo:
I don't care for the angle of the photo or the subject. Sorry it isn't interesting to me.
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It's all in your mind.
by aelith

Comment by marcvg:
As a French speaker, I'm not familiar with Salinger's work. I'll have to correct that ASAP. Great shot and I'm sorry (for me mainly) that the allusions escape me. But think of that: when I get to read the book, your picture will be in my mind somewhere :-) marcvg. Oh, forgot to say anything about the photo. I think the composition is great. I like the monotone effect. The only thing I don't like so much is the wall texture which sort of intrudes. Good luck with the challenge. 8

It's all in your mind.
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Comment by dimitrii:
Very beautifully executed!

It's all in your mind.
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Comment by LobsterClaws:
I just read that, yesterday! For the first time! ha...