Ready to cross the Atlantic
by greslizzz

Comment by skief:
This looks like it has potential, but there is nothing that really draws my eye to focus on, in other words there are too many subjects, tighter crop with the bell at the top left third may have worked, mainly because the sail on the top left is making me look up at something that is not very interesting, instead of at the ropes, and really interesting stuff at the bottom right.

Ready to cross the Atlantic
by greslizzz

Comment by zwhitley:
I like this shot. If I were to make any suggestions it would be to have tightened the shot on the rope/chains/bell. The rolled up sail in the upper left corner is distracting. It's kind of a grey day and the background is uninteresting. If you pulled in the shot you could have eliminated the sail, sky and minimized the background. Maybe positioned the bell in the upper left. But then agian I have no idea what you may have been avoiding below the photo.

Ready to cross the Atlantic
by greslizzz

Comment by trunki:
Nice. --8--

Ready to cross the Atlantic
by greslizzz

Comment by strongheart:
excellent ..10

Ready to cross the Atlantic
by greslizzz

Comment by BillE:
Nice composition, perhaps a tighter crop would work even better, really zooming in on the rusted gears or pulleys. Still very good.

Ready to cross the Atlantic
by greslizzz

Comment by whiteroom:
not rusted enough

Ready to cross the Atlantic
by greslizzz

Comment by paynekj:
I think your rusty subject is a bit lost in this picture, especially with the bright rope drawing the eye.

Between pages
by greslizzz

Comment by Olyuzi:
It's good you used B&W book to contrast with the colored bill, but I find the illustration in the book competes for attention with the bill.

Between pages
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Comment by lakritstroll:
esto no es un voto ;-)

Between pages
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Comment by xvalensx:
nice picture