Pencil Sketch
by mcrochip

Comment by autool:
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background7,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing6,
Challenge: Does your entry meet it?10,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5,
Total Averaged Rating7. Autool

Pencil Sketch
by mcrochip

Comment by Kavey:
Interesting idea. What does TICONDEROGA mean? Composition doesn't grab me. Wonder what it would be like taken from other angles?
Kavey

Pencil Sketch
by mcrochip

Comment by byetko:
I really like this picture, but i would have made the entire pencil in his hand be visible. 8.

Pencil Sketch
by mcrochip

Comment by HBunch:
You put the eraser where the eraser should go. At the end of the pencil!! I love it! That is really cute. The lighting is good, the shadows are subtle enough they aren't distracting. However, toward the pinky finger on the hand, there is a dark outline going around the finger and down the back of the hand. I tried to enlarge it and change the lighting to figure out what was making it, and I actually couldn't figure out if it was a funny dark shadow, or if you may have moved your hand while the photo was being taken. Anyway, If i'm getting that picky, then you have a nice photo. Good luck with the challenge.

Pencil Sketch
by mcrochip

Comment by justine:
Creative, cleaver, colorful, fun. This is a great job.....BRAVO!! Score 8 ~Kee

Pencil Sketch
by mcrochip

Comment by ron:
the eraser is in the perfect place! it makes me laugh

Pencil Sketch
by mcrochip

Comment by crisa58:
clever idea, but the composition doesn't thrill me. Perhaps if the other things looked like they were (or could be) used and echoed the angle/direction of the "pencil sketch"

Pencil Sketch
by mcrochip

Comment by BigSmiles:
That is a pretty cool idea. Reminds me of that guy on the show "art attack" (not sure if you've heard of it) when there's a camera high up and this guy makes a whole picture out of either strange objects or salt. That eraser gave me that feeling.

Pencil Sketch
by mcrochip

Comment by ClubJuggle:
Wery well-done!

Seventh Street Grille
by mcrochip

Comment by sjgleah:
Sorry, I think the composition is severely lacking in this image. Too much empty wall. 3 sjgleah