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by dwterry

Comment by daboardergirl:
This is my favorite of the series. If these were my senior pictures, I would pick this one for sure.

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by dwterry

Comment by downtherabbithole:
this one is very cute. I like the idea alot. it doesn't hurt that you got a pretty senior! I think the lighting is nice and the expression is spot on. great job

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by dwterry

Comment by citymars:
I've only done a quick skim, but I think this is my favorite.
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by dwterry

Comment by downtherabbithole:
woo budy, these night time/late evening shots really are awesome, you could build a whole look around them and you do them well. the movement and the energy of this image is just killer! I like that she is walking towards the camera and the confidence she seems to have. this is what a senior picture is all about. when she is thrity and look at this it will still have impact...great job. I think that your lighting is nice and moody, and the mood is in a series of images not just this one which adds to the value, but also the length of your sales session. that could mean more money though. to get picky again I think that the light in her eyes could be better. what ever that light source is just get it up a little bit higher and you would have nailed that problem.
other then that though, this image is great! I really enjoy the color harmony of things too, that is something alot of photographers skip over these days.

good job

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by dwterry

Comment by Jutilda:
A more typical stance but really well done. Again, the DOF and bokeh are GREAT!!!!

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by dwterry

Comment by Jutilda:
Great smile. The bokeh is a lovely backdrop to her wonderful face. Nice work.

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by dwterry

Comment by Jutilda:
Nice close up. The DOF is spot on. Great eyes. Is the light a smidge "hot" on her face? Maybe I need to drink some more coffee. ;~D Looks like you guys had fun on this photo shoot. Isn't it refreshing to have a model who isn't afraid to break out of the norm?

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by dwterry

Comment by Jutilda:
Cute. Skin tones are a touch yellow, but maybe that was your intent as they sort of "match" the hues of the wood. This girl is adorable.

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by dwterry

Comment by Jutilda:
Despite this one being more posed, the fun of it is the quirky tilt. It adds a bit of non-traditionalism. She has a wonderful smile and seems especialy comfortable in her own skin here. Nice series.

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by dwterry

Comment by downtherabbithole:
I think this one is almost there...I think the extreme camera tilt is a little to far, maybe if it was tilted the other way. right now it looks like she is leaning up and aginst the tilt and the creates tension, as apose to her leaning with the tilt wouldn't create so much tension. maybe, I might be wrong about that. the big thing that bothers me though is her eyes, and how dark they are, I don't know how you use the lighting here, but if it's all natural just don't have her lean so much into the railing.

there are some major things I do like though. I love the body part of the pose and the arms and the legs make for great line, another reason why I think the tilt doesn't need to be so much. The hands are nice and soft they don't look to posed, the expression on her face really is nice too.

I think you are almost there with this one, but as is it's still a nice image. I would love to hear what the model thinks about it.