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| 09/06/2012 03:55:11 PM |
Waiting for her returnby markwileyComment by lawrysimm: Commenting for the critique thread - I agree with your description of "really nice light". Echoing what others have said, the band of door is really distracting and detracts from the balance. Try cloning that out with the blackness and see if that improves the balance. I also agree with GeneralE that the use of negative space in this shot is really good.
The texture of the carpet and the way it runs through the image is really nice.
On the whole, a very good low key pet portrait. |
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| 09/06/2012 03:13:58 PM |
Waiting for her returnby markwileyComment by GeneralE: I think I'd tone down or just tone (add more color) just slightly to the very brightest highlights on the forehead. Right now they make me focus too much on just that part rather than her whole face.
Otherwise I like the use of light and negative space, pretty good capture of the emotion of the moment. |
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| 09/06/2012 03:11:37 PM |
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| 09/06/2012 03:08:18 PM |
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| 09/06/2012 07:46:34 AM |
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| 09/03/2012 01:42:37 PM |
Bridge to the Cityby markwileyComment by nam: I love this - and what a sky! I might look at what lightening the shadows a bit would do. Since the right 2/3 are "overcooked" a bit (not that I mind at all here LOL), what happens if you crop the left section where the sky is so tame off - take it to an 8x10 horizontal. But still lighten the shadows - I ache to see more detail in the skyline, the reflection, the girders . . . |
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| 09/03/2012 10:55:06 AM |
Dameby markwileyComment by nam: Nothing beats the shimmer of wet pavement or sidewalks when it's dark. Congratulations on the top ten. |
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| 09/03/2012 08:34:22 AM |
Dameby markwileyComment by Neat: Nice to finish near some good company....,what I liked the most about this shot were the rays of light to the right, great mood. |
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| 09/03/2012 07:36:25 AM |
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| 09/02/2012 11:59:19 PM |
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