gate view
by JACKIE BIRD

Comment by autool:
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 4
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 9
How well does it meet the challenge: 8
Total Averaged Rating 7.00 Dick
The lines of the metal structure all converging in the center are distracting. You had a wonderful subject, try using structural materials to enhance the building.

gate view
by JACKIE BIRD

Comment by Donatien:
I get the feeling the smaller image size hides a slightly blurry image that is way too centered in it's composition. The rusty bars seems more in the way than anyting else. Perhaps with better focus on the rusty part and less depth of field to take away the curiosity from the buildnig and surroundings? I'd used the allowed 640 pixels in this shot.

gate view
by JACKIE BIRD

Comment by notonline:
looks very blury. would have done better if the shot was closer to the object.

gate view
by JACKIE BIRD

Comment by maurice1:
Excellent photograph........

gate view
by JACKIE BIRD

Comment by admart01:
punchier light would make this fine shot jump out from the rest.

gate view
by JACKIE BIRD

Comment by °°gummi°°:
background could use a little more blur :o)

gate view
by JACKIE BIRD

Comment by doctornick:
too small, out of focus, over exposed

gate view
by JACKIE BIRD

Comment by whagerbaumer:
I would crop out everything to the left of the edge of the shed. Even so, there is not much coherence in this photo.

gate view
by JACKIE BIRD

Comment by cghubbell:
Looks like the lighting overesposed part of the background shed near the center of the bars. This was a bit distracting to me.

Wheels Galore
by JACKIE BIRD

Comment by beckettboots:
nice shot, but it should be bigger so we can see it better