LETS GO
by JACKIE BIRD

Comment by Brooklynsbridge:
Small picture...sure you got that alot.

Jane
by JACKIE BIRD

Comment by cmangis:
Thje lighting is a bit harsh, and the background isn't enhancing the shot.

Jane
by JACKIE BIRD

Comment by Zoomdak:
Fits the topic. Small, interesing black line on top. If your subject was further from the background, the background would be less distracing. Subject is good off center, vertical rule of thirds.

Jane
by JACKIE BIRD

Comment by maurice1:
Excellent photograph as usual !!!

Jane
by JACKIE BIRD

Comment by Miinerva:
unfortenatly the colours don't mix very well here, in my humble opinion. The photo though, is sharp and it is good that you did not place the doll in the center. I would have liked to see a more natrual background here though, and maybe something small beside the doll, to creae a more diagonal composition. Think that would add some life to it.

Jane
by JACKIE BIRD

Comment by Bran-O-Rama:
Interesting background but I'm not so sure about the foreground. Perhaps placing the doll on a completely white fore/background would've helped to keep focus on the doll. Shadow of the doll pretty harsh.

gate view
by JACKIE BIRD

Comment by KaDi:
Interesting composition, disturbing somehow. (That's not necessarily bad.) Think I would have mobed a bit left to include the end of the broken x against the white and to see the axel on the wheel--maybe that's why it causes tension for me.

gate view
by JACKIE BIRD

Comment by Go-KL:
THe gate is out of focus which is really off-putting.

gate view
by JACKIE BIRD

Comment by Ambo:
this photo really works for me...great depth and use of natural lighting...well done = 9

gate view
by JACKIE BIRD

Comment by orussell:
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 5
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 4
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 5