Intensity
by jasonmccarthy

Comment by Zeissman:
underexposed flash shot with a compressed brightness range. Every thing here is grey.

Intensity
by jasonmccarthy

Comment by sheyingshi88:
The picture doesn't seem to illuminate the personality for me. Processing also too dull.

Intensity
by jasonmccarthy

Comment by Swashbuckler:
Maybe a bit dark, good focus, are we birthing? What are we doing? The suspense is killing me. What is he intense about?
Photo 8 Creativity 6 B&W 7 total 7

Intensity
by jasonmccarthy

Comment by FranziskaLang:
A nice portrait, with good title. I think this photo could be improved further with some post processing to add some more contrast, it's too much gray and gray for my liking at the moment.

Intensity
by jasonmccarthy

Comment by GeneralE:
I want a pediatric OR cap with balloons printed on it (if that is what that is, that is)!

Having things a little brighter overall might help covey a more optimistic outcome (if that's what you want to convey, of course).

Intensity
by jasonmccarthy

Comment by cthenk:
Like the serious face with the hat - what is happening on his left shoulder? wish it was a tad brighter, but good job.

Intensity
by jasonmccarthy

Comment by rvicente:
it would have been more "intense" without the balloons on his surgical cap.

Intensity
by jasonmccarthy

Comment by langdon:
I think a tighter crop of his face is needed to show any intensity. And perhaps shoot from a lower angle.

Intensity
by jasonmccarthy

Comment by irae:
Good B/W (an all photography, really) is all about light, and the ugliest light known to man (except possibly flourescent) is, for some reason, built into most cameras. It's very hard and directional, which flattens textures, and casts horrid shadows nine times out of ten. The party headwrap would have me worried if this were my surgeon, unless I was 7. For intensity, maybe you could zoom in on his eyes.

Intensity
by jasonmccarthy

Comment by Tiggarroo:
a bit dark around the face but good focus