Telling Secrets
by bobdaveant

Comment by saintaugust:
good idea..

Behind the pines
by bobdaveant

Comment by nihil:
a little too much contrast between foreground and background

Attitude
by bobdaveant

Comment by graphicfunk:
This was a very good entry for this challenge.

Attitude
by bobdaveant

Comment by Ironworker:
I can feel her attitude. Good job. Among my favorites in the challenge.

Attitude
by bobdaveant

Comment by debitipton:
I've seen that very same look from my daughter!

Telling Secrets
by bobdaveant

Comment by rightsaidfred:
I love the look on her face.

It's cold outside
by bobdaveant

Comment by bobdaveant:
Thanks for the input!

It's cold outside
by bobdaveant

Comment by thatcloudthere:
This is great! I like it...it has an 'old world' feel to it. There's a distracting line that I would burn out going across the hood towards her left eye (her left, not the picture).

Other than that, it has great expression and feeling to it...very nice!

Telling Secrets
by bobdaveant

Comment by TooCool:
Excellent expression in the right models face! Great use of catchlights in her eyes. You are very overexposed though blowing out a lot of the detail in both the models tops. If you were shooting for a high key approach, you missed it by a smidge. I see this in the discolored background. Compositionally, the negative space to the right appears to off balance the shot. Cropping with a couple sheets of paper held up to my monitor, cutting off a third of the model on the left (say right behind her ear) and the dead space on the right makes a much cleaner composition with more oomph.
TC

It's cold outside
by bobdaveant

Comment by chik0325:
It looks very cold in this picture, nice portrait.