At the edge of loneliness
by Pascal

Comment by skewsme:
Excellent perspective. Communicates so much. Nice work.

Legendary Rock Colors
by Pascal

Comment by sfalice:
Greetings from the Critique Club

Pascal! What do you know. I've drawn another of your images for a critique.

Well, this time you're not running off the edge of the earth into a blazing sun, you're looking for a Rainbow. It's a great idea, but execution may have been a problem for you.

It seems to me that there is quite a bit of information in this image and you might want to remove some of it to make the center of attraction more obvious and important. For example, that white space in the top left, is the brightest thing in the image and it draws the attention of the viewer - not what you want to have happen. And it adds little to the 'Burst of Color' theme.

I'd suggest cropping down quite a bit, still leaving some of the horizontal bars in the frame (to avoid the dreaded copying another person's art work rule) and perhaps cropping into the colored arc just a bit as well.

Finally, Pascal, I'd suggest using a tripod for this type of image. It is just a tiny bit soft, and you might think about how it would look tack-sharp.

Okay, that'll give you something to go on, and I'm delighted to see that you are enjoying DPC. Keep up the good work.

Souvenir from Stockholm
by Pascal

Comment by Konador:
Nice photo, however I'm not at all keen on the bright yellow tinting you gave it.

At the edge of loneliness
by Pascal

Comment by Pippi:
Love it!

At the edge of loneliness
by Pascal

Comment by HamstringJones:
this picture makes me really sad... I hate to say that i like it, but i do...

At the edge of loneliness
by Pascal

Comment by PhotoRyno:
it makes a statement..so much more with a woman subject Good photograhpy

Supernova - our Sun's final shape
by Pascal

Comment by sfalice:
Greetings from the Critique Club

Pascal! This is the second time I've been lucky enough to draw one of your images to critique.

Frankly, I love this image. As an avid Science Fiction reader, I can relate easily to this depiction of the civilization's last moments. There we are, driving off the cliff to infinity.

I guess you were the victim of "Did Not Meet the Challenge" voters who couldn't see the very defined shapes in this image well enough to give you a good score.

The fact that you have a 'blown out' portion of the sky is perfect for this interpretation. The color of the center pavement stripe is gorgeous. The sky is gorgeous.

I cannot offer any critical comment. I can only sympathise.

Good luck in your next Challenge.

Alice

Souvenir from Stockholm
by Pascal

Comment by Azrifel:
I like this color, good and strong. Makes the photo timeless.

Souvenir from Stockholm
by Pascal

Comment by fotodude:
hmm... i like the image but not the tone, maybe a traditional sepia would have been better, and a little grundge and contrast would make it look like an old print.

as far as the image goes very clasic. well done in the taking not the making.

At the edge of loneliness
by Pascal

Comment by mpeters:
Lots of emotion stirred with this picture. Very nice.