The Unspoken Words
by kghoshal

Comment by gaurawa:
the topic was to have words in your composition.. the pic is good, but doesnt' fit the challenge

The Unspoken Words
by kghoshal

Comment by Zman8:
Read the challenge........gees!

The Unspoken Words
by kghoshal

Comment by rgordon:
A very nice shot, but despite the title, IMHO this does not meet the challenge criteria.

IBM Thinkpad T40
by kghoshal

Comment by airatic:
Aloha from the Critique Club!

This is definitely a tough subject to capture. Keyboards are difficult to light properly, and DOF is tricky as well. It looks like you have the right idea with the angle of the shot, just deepen the DOF to bring more of the image into focus. A little more ambient light would make this image sharper, since it is very dark right now.

I think as far as meeting the challenge, this image needs a little bit more relevance. Keep in mind that the image should suggest or identify your specific product, and at the moment this could be any computer. It would also help if you cleaned the touch-mouse since it looks very dirty in the image, and not appealling as a product feature.

Your composition is well thought out, and you have a strong image here with a few tweaks, but this is more of a nice stock photo rather than a branded advertisement.

The Unspoken Words
by kghoshal

Comment by albeck:
Sorry I dont see it

The Unspoken Words
by kghoshal

Comment by colddog15:
very small point -- background pulls just a tad

The Unspoken Words
by kghoshal

Comment by MrsFuzzButt:
Another beautiful picture. Had you snuck in just one word I would be able to give you a 10.... 6

The Unspoken Words
by kghoshal

Comment by Soleil9:
nice composition, slightyl out of focus howerver. The kicker, I don't think it meets the challange, however. "Take a photograph where complete words -- not just individual letters -- play a creative role in your composition"

The Unspoken Words
by kghoshal

Comment by Node:
Its a good photo but without meeting the challenge criteria I think your score will suffer.

The Unspoken Words
by kghoshal

Comment by animes2k:
i'd like to stretch for this, but the challenge seems pretty clear. nice editorial/portrait shot, tho a little soft, I like the tone.