Happy Happy Babysunday
by Telephant

Comment by Ecce_Signum:
Hi Bryson, Andi here from the Critique Club.

It's been a year and you have not been around for a while, PM me if you still want a Critique on this image please.

Tunnel Vision
by Telephant

Comment by jomari:
Congrats on the red. Well done entry and a great achievement for your second go.

Tunnel Vision
by Telephant

Comment by P-A-U-L:
Congrats on the red. Nicely done!

Tunnel Vision
by Telephant

Comment by Telephant:

Originally posted by Bear_Music: Congratulations! A ribbon on your second entry! Let's see some more. This is hauntingly lovely, the tendrils like some sort biological (or even alien) runes we can no longer (or cannot yet) read.

Thank you so much. I agree alien like!

Tunnel Vision
by Telephant

Comment by Bear_Music:
Congratulations! A ribbon on your second entry! Let's see some more. This is hauntingly lovely, the tendrils like some sort biological (or even alien) runes we can no longer (or cannot yet) read.

Tunnel Vision
by Telephant

Comment by Pangurban:
Good choice for the challenge. I like that the tendrils are crisp but my eye wants the centre in focus too.

Tunnel Vision
by Telephant

Comment by Covert_Oddity:
Certainly one of the more abstract I've seen in the challenge.

Remember when WinAmp was the big thing for playing MP3s and it had that visualisation plugin thing, this reminds me a lot of that!

Tunnel Vision
by Telephant

Comment by Zita:
The sense of a burrow is quite pronounced and the journey via those well defined lines decorated with tendrils is pleasing, but, for me, the center vaporizes the odyssey. For me, it is too large, too OOF, and contains nothing nearly as interesting as the excellent lines directing the eye to the center of the image. I think the balance of your abstract composition is very effective; I just wish it gave me a reward once I got to the center. Valiant effort; it just doesn't work for me personally.

Please know, I am NOT voting in this challenge; only commenting.

Is this a yucca?

Tunnel Vision
by Telephant

Comment by giantmike:
Electric.

Happy Happy Babysunday
by Telephant

Comment by colorcarnival:
I have to say that it's a shame this finished so low. You captured a cute and candid moment. I say continue to work with this type of style and the only thing i can tell you for now is to pay attention to what is in the background and try and avoid the clutter. Create a balance between your subject and items behind her.

She's a cutie!