What Is It?
by braghiroly

Comment by snaffles:
Greetings from the Critique Club

This image needs a lot of work if you want to improve. Centred composition is generally seen as somewhat safe and therefore a bit boring; there isn't enough detail to see what it might be; mostly, the huge bleachy pile of white bleeding down from the top right corner down into the middle bottom third is just a distraction. Shooting faster would have helped a lot.

Hope this helps

Susan

The girl and her backpack
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Comment by Ammie:
Lovely contrasts here

The girl and her backpack
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Comment by sidpixel:
Interesting viewpoint to isolate her against the sky, though I find the right hand structure distracting it doesn't feel as though its adding anything to the overall image. Just a personal thing, I'm not keen on selective desat unless its done very subtly. Good luck, I hope you do well with it.

The girl and her backpack
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Comment by ArnaMarie:
Voted earlier, back to comment. I like the b&w conversion and nice colour on the backpack. The image is for me unfortunately not quite as interesting as your competition in this challenge.

The girl and her backpack
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Comment by ubique:
Yep. That's good; so much of it's outside the frame which is one of my favourite things in a photograph. Thank you.

The girl and her backpack
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Comment by MadMan2k:
I like this. It's an unusual perspective but it works well.

Ew
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Comment by MadMan2k:
I wish the focus here was on the caterpillar.

What Is It?
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Comment by Pangurban:
I like the detail on this but distracted by the very bright top right hand corner.

What Is It?
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Comment by jgirl57:
Looks wooden to me or something .. then I saw a little creature that I almost missed because of it it was camo into things.. looks like a little sand crab

What Is It?
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Comment by primabarbara:
hhmm, there is torn wood ... but what exactly...hmm
I'm already looking forward to the solution