Together
by midnightride2

Comment by Elemmennope:
A bit too much like a scene from an amateur porn home video to me.

The woman is beautiful and that sheer white shirt/robe is a great prop. I think I'd have turned the lights down a bit to get more shadow play on the skin from her curves and the folds of the soft shirt. I think you could get some great images with her modeling!

Together
by midnightride2

Comment by jonpink:
OK I see what your trying to do here, but it comes off as very tacky porn to me - sorry if that was not intended - if it was full marks :D

The woman is attractive, but her pose is more slutty than arty purely because she is grasping her own breasts which i see no real need for unless it's for the pure reason to draw attention to tits.

The male seems to be there for no reasons - his grasp on her waist isn't strong or convincing.

Exposure wise it's also a bit over done - maybe your screen is a bit too dark -I would recommend looking at the bar below every vote page and seeing if you can see the last 4 blacks on the left.

If not feel free to PM me and I will explain the calibration process.

Together
by midnightride2

Comment by Ironworker:
Definitely one of my favorites of the challenge. The female's pose & expression are great. She doesn't look overly thrilled, more of a "are you done yet?" look. One thing keeps nagging at me though, why doesn't the male model show his face??? 9

Together
by midnightride2

Comment by dartompkins:
Nothing "Together" about this lady's expression. I would have chosen a different title.

Together
by midnightride2

Comment by blindjustice:
I don't know why- I would have had the model cover the nipples. It may have added some sensuality and intrigue here. I mean- no complaints but it may have helped explain the shot to me.

Together
by midnightride2

Comment by tyrkinn:
A bit blurry, and could use a bit more contrast, the background would work better totally black.

Together
by midnightride2

Comment by siggi:
beutifull model.
Pose not giveing me "together"... think it would work better if she was with her hands on to his.
Bit more postediting on the black background makeing it totaly black.

Together
by midnightride2

Comment by nico_blue:
her facial expression reads a bit as unhappy, almost like she didnt really want to have her picture taken.

Together
by midnightride2

Comment by justine:
Lacking focus but I do like the compositon and lighting.

Together
by midnightride2

Comment by aKiwi:
The background looks like it is immeadiately behind the models. Needs to be further away and more out of focus.
The Focus appears a little off.
Seems a little static,