Mountain Stream
by divernick

Comment by dartompkins:
Great shot except for the blown sky. The ridge adds interest, but I think I would have cropped it out in this instance.

Mountain Stream
by divernick

Comment by ugas1a:
A little too hazy but water effect was captured nicely.

Mountain Stream
by divernick

Comment by Gallatin:
Beautiful

Mountain Stream
by divernick

Comment by kari1:
This is a lovely picture, good capture of the moving water, but the size really doesn't help, it could have so much more impact - but it is really small.

Super Motard
by divernick

Comment by mk:
I don't know what motard is but the word makes me laugh. Nice job of panning and nice colors.

Super Motard
by divernick

Comment by shanz:
awesome panning :)

Super Motard
by divernick

Comment by ursula:
Good job of panning!

Super Motard
by divernick

Comment by whatdewuc:
Dizzy looking, Great action study and control of shutter speed. Good luck.

Super Motard
by divernick

Comment by ShannonLee:
really really REALLLLY well done!

At Work
by divernick

Comment by loseme:
*Critique Club*

Very appropriate for the busy challenge, and very fitting for this group. Good title for you piece. I think you did a job accomplishing what I would think you set out to do: look busy by typing. I really do like the image as a whole, it just feels like it is missing that little edge which lets images jump up in the scores. From my point of view, I might have cropped it a little tighter or removed the stuff behind the monitor. Also I would have but something on the screen that drew some attention into the shot. One other little thing that I personally would have altered is taking off the bracelet, we can tell the hands are moving without the bracelet and the movement of it was a little distracting for me. Looking at the image again I would be really curious to see a shot like this with a darker lighting like nighttime so the monitor glows and causes the hand s to have a small glow from the screen.

I think you had a great idea and did an excellent job capturing a challenging effect.