the ultimate
by bergand

Comment by blueswolf58:
Could use a bit more edge delineation/rim lighting (at least on one additional side of candle) to help viewer find their bearings. I'll have to assume that the lower dull light is the flame's reflection on some sort of surface. Too many things to guess at here on a subject that should be easy to distinguish.... kinda cool in it's own abstract way, but rather distracting at the same time. Needs more visual info if you're going to convince viewers that THIS is the ultimate vision of silence. :)

the ultimate
by bergand

Comment by Rasai:
Silent flicker of the dancing flame.... but what of the frame?

the ultimate
by bergand

Comment by gpierson:
the border takes away from your image, pulling the eye out instead of inward

the ultimate
by bergand

Comment by jpochard:
Silent, yes. But this photo really just lacks any interest to me.

the ultimate
by bergand

Comment by garlic:
Think the image might need a litle more sharpness. The border (or frame) I think is way to much.

the ultimate
by bergand

Comment by Polar7:
Nice composition. Love the glow reflection at the bottom.

the ultimate
by bergand

Comment by admart01:
not too crazy about the frame, like the placement of the flame and the reflection.

the ultimate
by bergand

Comment by amsmyth:
too much empty and meaningless space, not enough direction for the eye

the ultimate
by bergand

Comment by arbil14:
very well done....nice framing, too..

the ultimate
by bergand

Comment by SirBiggsALot:
silence?