As Spring Begins
by djbdj

Comment by sarsonuk:
To show spring begining wouldnt you think that the colour of that season may reflect it better,4

Hollywood Blvd.
by djbdj

Comment by ericwoo:
I like the idea you started with here, but I think that your execution needed to be stronger. I'd like to see the gentleman standing a bit more off the left border of the frame. It feels cramped as is. I'd also like to see a more contrasting tonal range. With the harsh light here, the image looks a bit too flat.

As Spring Begins
by djbdj

Comment by h2:
the oof foreground is kinda distracting, it's not really clear how "spring begins", might have been better visible in color

As Spring Begins
by djbdj

Comment by JimyThing:
I need the whole tree

Hollywood Blvd.
by djbdj

Comment by Shmee:
This photo has a lot of character. I like the text of the "forplay sign," the cop car and the position of the man standing. I do wish there was more contrast though.

Hollywood Blvd.
by djbdj

Comment by SaraR:
There is seriously a shop called 'Forplay'?!
I am afraid that there isn't enough definition in this photograph for it to work for me. The subject is surely the man standing in the left corner, and yet this is the area where focus is softest. The photo also has a washed out feel - a little judicious burning would help give a little more contrast. On a positive note, the inclusion of the police car helps provide a sense of story to the photo.

Hollywood Blvd.
by djbdj

Comment by JeffDay:
a bit 'fuzzy'

Hollywood Blvd.
by djbdj

Comment by HeiSch:
seems to be washed out

Hollywood Blvd.
by djbdj

Comment by madison461:
"What are your dreams?" Street man from Pretty Woman

Wish I could see more of the guy's face on the corner.

Hollywood Blvd.
by djbdj

Comment by tannah:
Too grey, try higher the black levels just a bit ?