My Yellow Flower
by bayu

Comment by PTLParsons:
Not enough focus. With this focus of the flower the bacground should be solid and dark. If you want to keep the background then the flow whuld be much sharper in focus to show real difference, in my opinion.

My Yellow Flower
by bayu

Comment by thatguy:
nice image the flower almost looks like cloth, good texture

My Yellow Flower
by bayu

Comment by mcrael:
I don't like the brown background - probably because of its texture. Flower is blurry.

My Yellow Flower
by bayu

Comment by pstuhr:
Needs some serious level and sharpening work in Photoshop. Otherwise, this would have been very, very good.

My Yellow Flower
by bayu

Comment by KingLok:
Colours can be a little brighter for more impact

My Yellow Flower
by bayu

Comment by BJ:
Really nice - like the composition, colors and texture it conveys.

a very quite caravan park
by bayu

Comment by ClubJuggle:
*Critique Club*

FIRST IMPRESSION: Eerie lighting, seems like something out of a horror movie. I'm not sure if that adds to the photo or not.

CHALLENGE: Meets the challenge.

COMPOSITION: The light on the left side is a distraction. If you crop just to the right of that, the image is much stronger. The light pulls the viewer's attention, but once it is removed, everything in the image works together to bring the viewer's eye to the sign.

TECHNICAL: Other than the red cast, the technical aspects of this sht are excellent. I'm not sure what you were trying to do with the red cast, but I think I like it.

CONCLUSION: A strong image that probably could have scored a little better with a very minor change.

Thanks for sharing and good luck in future challenges!

a very quite caravan park
by bayu

Comment by jgillard:
A little too red. jgillard3

a very quite caravan park
by bayu

Comment by vtruan:
The light on the left is distracting, cropping this out may give a different look.

a very quite caravan park
by bayu

Comment by inspzil:
Great mood in this pic. Real peaceful, restful, like vacation should be. The colors are very nice and warm. Good pic - Inspzil