The new take on customer service center? (I prefer the old days)
by xvalensx

Comment by hannafate:
Well spotted! I wish I could get away with posting that in my shop.

The new take on customer service center? (I prefer the old days)
by xvalensx

Comment by Skip:
this might be more powerful without the clock and with more of the bottom sign

The new take on customer service center? (I prefer the old days)
by xvalensx

Comment by Imagineer:
A great sign, but a shame you couldn't get a human in view to give it context. Composition is awkward and too centred. Lighting is quite flat.

The new take on customer service center? (I prefer the old days)
by xvalensx

Comment by belette:
hahahahahaha excellent!!!!!

The new take on customer service center? (I prefer the old days)
by xvalensx

Comment by cycloxslug:
hee hee. i wish you did a little more of a closeup on the sign...not sure the rest adds much to the shot.

Brushing to keep thy teeth "heavenly" clean (unedited picture)
by xvalensx

Comment by xvalensx:
thanks all for your comments!

I had this idea for a while before the pictures were due, but got caught up in work and had no time to reshoot! This was more of an initial test shot rather than one that gave me time to REFOCUS and recompose (I also planned to angle the brush a slight bit more toward the viewer).

Thanks for your comments however! Theres always the next one!

Brushing to keep thy teeth "heavenly" clean (unedited picture)
by xvalensx

Comment by orussell:
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background (20% Weight): 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing (20% Weight): 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. (30% Weight): 4
How well does it meet the challenge (30% Weight): 8
Total Rating (Rounded) 6

Brushing to keep thy teeth "heavenly" clean (unedited picture)
by xvalensx

Comment by peecee:
composition is not bad, maybe a squirl of toothpaste on the brush?
I don't like the bright light on the brush. good idea for the challenge though..

Brushing to keep thy teeth "heavenly" clean (unedited picture)
by xvalensx

Comment by ionyou:
if only the brush were in focus...

Brushing to keep thy teeth "heavenly" clean (unedited picture)
by xvalensx

Comment by TrollMan:
Nice lighting but I don't care so much for the soft focus. Still good score from me!