color pencils
by alysa

Comment by K-Rob:
Why do they look so compressed? Sort of like the final frame in a Chinese Karate film. I feel that the yellow marker on the right could have been eliminated to create more symmetry.

color pencils
by alysa

Comment by AmiYuy:
I love the perspective and the panoramic feel. It would have been better without the yellow pencil and those on that side.

color pencils
by alysa

Comment by Mark:
are they not round?

color pencils
by alysa

Comment by jbeazell:
the distortion is a little distracting, especially given the empty space to the left, but it does have strong parallel lines!

color pencils
by alysa

Comment by ccraft:
I really like this composition and the colours. Good luck!

color pencils
by alysa

Comment by BrennanOB:
Are those oval pencils? I think you have over distorted this.

color pencils
by alysa

Comment by Gamz:
I like the colors and the focus.

color pencils
by alysa

Comment by KevinRiggs:
Very good idea. I can overlook a little distortion due to the wide angle of the photo but it becomes distracting to me when I can't seem to find the focus point. The fact that I cannot easily select anything in particular to focus on detracts a little from this composition. Also the bright yellow pencil on the right creates a boundary that should be mimiced on the left of the photo. The intensity of that color seems to draw attention to the lack of balance. Very good idea and a decent attempt. I think if you worked with this more by perhaps put down black construction paper and laid clear plexi over it to remove the wood grain while keeping the reflection, then worked on a little more symmetry and getting a slightly more pronounced focus point/subject this would be a killer shot. As it is I see it as a 5.

color pencils
by alysa

Comment by s4nd3r99:
nice idea, bad execution imo

color pencils
by alysa

Comment by maciupiciu:
too deformed and maby too croped..