Young Lust
by Jas

Comment by LalliSig:
Nice lighting but could have been better, I especially find the lack of lighting on the face to be the thing I wouldhave worked most on here. Also, the pose and probably choice of lens makes her right arm/elbow seem a bit big compared to the rest of her (wich I am 100% sure is not the case with this beautiful, well proportioned young lady) so I might want to suggest a slightly longer telephoto lens to even that out. Nice job anyway, got a 7 from me.

Young Lust
by Jas

Comment by dcl53:
Technically good; expressively not.

Young Lust
by Jas

Comment by GoldBerry:
Great dress but not fond of the lighting...I like her expression but her arm behind her head isn't flattering..she's tiny but that arm looks big.

Young Lust
by Jas

Comment by kawana:
Young lust is right lol, shes cute :D Hope shes not younger than 16 or ill feel creepy :P

Young Lust
by Jas

Comment by gjumi:
6 too harsh light on her right side of the face, which doesn`t convey the idea of the harshness of young lust...i guess...

Young Lust
by Jas

Comment by sacredspirit:
Wow, I love it. I love your decision to throw the rule of thirds out the window. I love its simplicity, and the slightly off center approach. The lighting is almost perfect, though a slight reflection behind the top of her head would be nice, "maybe". GL. 8

Young Lust
by Jas

Comment by smardaz:
Looks a little too much like Britney Spears.

Young Lust
by Jas

Comment by saiphfire:
This might have benefited from a reflector to make one side of the fact not disappear completely.

The Recipe
by Jas

Comment by MikeL54:
The tube having "air" in it loses something 'for me'.

The Recipe
by Jas

Comment by graphicfunk:
Very well captured. Bump.