The Missus
by redmoon

Comment by superdave_909:
Posing and expression are good, but the shadows are way too harsh.
I would straighten the necklace so that it follows the neck line of the shirt.

Blue screen Blues
by redmoon

Comment by MattBL34:
Very interesting, and im sure WE ALL know what you mean by "Blue screen blues,"

The Missus
by redmoon

Comment by KarenB:
dark shadow under her chin and on her neck may have been avoided with a reflector (homemade or store bought). there are also other shadows that may have been softened in this way, or with a fill light.
a soft expression is also sometimes more effective with a tighter crop. :)

The Missus
by redmoon

Comment by boomer:
Well, it's not grabbing me. Hmmm... The background is kind of distracting with the fold so near her face. Her eyes are kind of half closed and she's looking in an unusual direction. There's a bit of a distraction in the black garmet by her neck with a bit of skin showing through. All that said, I think with a bit of effort you'd have something really cool here. Have her look up, perhaps.

The Missus
by redmoon

Comment by ddmckinney1954:
i think this would be much better without the blue background...it takes away from the young lady

The Missus
by redmoon

Comment by ccraft:
Really conveys a mood. Good luck!

The Missus
by redmoon

Comment by librodo:
Tighter crop on top will certainly improve this shot. Nice colors though.

Blue screen Blues
by redmoon

Comment by Bibliophile:
This is one of the few people shots that make me believe that there's something out there. Good job!

The Missus
by redmoon

Comment by justine:
I like this shot. Maybe a little more trimmed off the left and a little more light on her beautiful hair. I hope this does well it's really very nice.

Blue screen Blues
by redmoon

Comment by garlic:
Like the lightning. Litle blurred (long exposure?).