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Comment by JoshuaM:
This is really a great way to think of his challenge. I love the wood guys too.

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Comment by prozac:
I really like the little wooden figures. Just a little out of focus on the hand pointing to the screw.

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Comment by whatdewuc:
Love these guys...

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Comment by Pug-H:
Well, there's a bolt behind the pointing figure, but it seems too long for the missing bolt on the diagram. Good idea, though.

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Comment by Artan:
made me smile...thanks

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Comment by DarkRider:
Hi Bill,
Scott here from the Critique Club...

First congratulations on your 19th place finish and your third highest scoring pic. A great capture, perfect focus and DOF. I do see a couple of things that I would have voted this pic higher for. As is I voted a 5. For me a 5 is - meets the challenge and is technically sound.

Because this was a Members challenge with Advanced editing rules. I think the board could have been a lot cleaner. Clearing up all of the black and white flecks would have helped a lot for me.

The red shaft and red and blue flight kinda blend into the colours of the board. Something more contrasting and flashy would have added some "POP" for me.

So a good all-around pic, just needed a little more wow for me.
I had a good look through your port and really like the creativity in your work. Keep up the good work and more ribbons will defiantly come.

I hope my critique helps; I know it helped me to reinforce the details in my own work. If there are any questions/comments you would like on a particular aspect of you pic please feel free to PM me.
Scott

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Message edited by author 2004-10-03 23:52:56.

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Comment by graphicfunk:
Congratulations on your 19th placing with this great stop action entry. Cool and very demanding work.

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Comment by mrorange002:
bulls eye! There is another shot similar to this in the challenge, but I think the composition in this one is nicer. Hope you explain how it was done.

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Comment by graphicfunk:
Why do some members question these type of shots? It is a waste of time and effort. Very well done...on the money craftmanship. Bumping up.

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Comment by marbo:
Great shot my favorite of the challenge. 10